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Friday, March 11, 2011

RAIN

Many of us have enjoyed a rainy morning, some in the big city, others in the field or in the mountains. What about those rainy summer afternoons pregnant continuing to make us run and jump in the puddles in our wake.

I am m sure more than a smile flowed from our lips, the product of a wonderful moment in our hearts.
I can not imagine a world without rain, without the torrential downpour that fill us with joy through one of the most sensational cycles of life.

I hope that both be agree on some word, in any line of this poem, but if not, at least in some thought about this wonder of nature.





RAIN

In this poem I turn to God through one of its most beautiful natural forms: Rain.

Let me look you through your rain falls,
a single moment,
a flash of time,
and then, when it shines the rainbow,
I remember where it flows the light of a star.

Let me feel you through the fog that remains,
like veil of silk
blowing in the wind,
and then the breeze in our face,
tell us the secrets of the true sun.

River of life becomes in lights in the sky,
furtive diamonds,
audacious enchanting,
wrap me in waves of your peace, which,
if I close my eyes ... I fall asleep.

Debrah Riddleton

15 comments:

  1. Beautiful poem, I love the rain and walk under it when it is not very strong and makes good temperature. I would be happy if my picture will inspire a poem. Greetings.

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  2. Deborah,
    I think you have captured the feel of the rain, perfectly here.
    I think me must be so thankful for the gift of rain, in these times.
    Thank you for your kind visit to my Blog and poem too. Always appreciated.
    Best wishes,
    Eileen

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  4. Dear Leovi:
    I am deeply grateful to you. Will choose a picture and write a poem accordingly. Thanks for your support and kindness.
    Blessings:
    Debrah

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  5. My dear Eileen:
    You know perfectly my grateful to you. Your support, your kindness and sweet words.
    Thanks a lot:
    Debrah

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  6. Dear Senad R:
    Thank you very much. I will make contact with you, soon.
    All my gratitude:
    Debrah

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  7. My lovely Debrah:
    Excellent poem! The theme is deep, powerful and beautiful.
    Confratulations!
    Diane

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  8. Me parece un poema muy profundo y lleno de divinidad. Hablar con Dios es muy gratificante, pero hablar con él a través de su obra, es celestial.

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  9. Dear Diane and Sergio:
    Thank you very much.
    Your words words strengthen me.
    Debah

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  10. Your poem is wonderfull. Rain is a miracle of world.

    Your words are deep. God lives in your poetry.

    Congratulations
    A kiss for you
    Ana

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  12. Dear Ana:
    I appreciate your words. In the time that I met you, I found in you a wonderful friend, always ready to offer a word of support and encouragement.
    Blessings:
    Debrah

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  13. A great story, I wish you all the luck in the world to Clarice. Now I who asked permission to publish it on my blog. Cheers to both.

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  14. Very nice poem. Loved the imagery...kind of mystical and mysterious.

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