Photo by Leovi http://lafotografiaefectistaabstracta.blogspot.com |
Through understanding the many life forms designed by the Lord, a sense of majesty permeated my senses. How can exists life five thousand miles under the sea, without light, without apparent sense?
The marvel of the struggle to survive in such extreme conditions has allowed me to also marvel of man's struggle for survival itself.The different societies trying to find a way to understand their purpose and be on earth, but their actions indicate the opposite.
Then binds me to try to understand the ways and byways of the tireless struggle and the scandalous failure of attempts for success.
This poem aims to lift a superlative man's life, giving it a sense of community and love all those who respect and love their temporary stay in this world.
Rivers of Life is a phrase that attempts, in my personal perspective, offering a more comprehensive term, richer in substance and deeper into their ideological concept.
I´VE SEEN RIVERS OF LIFE
Life is a stopped moment by a light when
You were born, and a silence into oblivion ...
I've seen rivers of life
spilled red by fire,
running in channels where once there were flowers
and trees filled with thousand nests.
I've seen rivers of life
where hope is born among horses
pulled by a dream, a land
that begs a seed, a tongue
licking the moist wind of fear.
I've seen choppy waters burst
into the hard cliff of destiny.
I've seen rivers of life
in the silent wall where the stones,
sigh and reflected the desire
silenced by the extermination.
I've seen rivers of life
In every voice, every poem, every verse
constructed from the clutches of silence
of those who have nothing, only ice
on the concave side of the reverse.
I've seen the gray froth of their wings
intermittent crashing to the ground.
I've seen rivers of life
there, where he was born a new man
a new attempt, an audacious sun
fighting for no to be coal in its own fire.
Debrah Riddleton
I´m not sure call it exquisite poem. The scenes are powerful and full of beauty. However, the reality is cruel and sad.
ReplyDeleteYou present this reality with amazing rawness.
Diane
Disturbing set of reports and reflections. The poem is amazing and touching.
ReplyDeleteRichard
Hermosas palabras. Has intentado con éxito apuntar a la grave desigualdad, exterminio incluso de que son víctima los seres humanos del mundo.
ReplyDeleteNo tengo más palabras que felicitarte por tan profundo poema.
Carlos Santaella Millán
My dear Debrah:
ReplyDeleteDebrah, Debrah, always Debrah.
Wonderful!
Debbie
My dear Diane:
ReplyDeleteAlways it's a pleasure getting your words.
Thanks a lot:
Debrah
Richard and Carlos:
ReplyDeleteIt's unpredictable the effect of a poem in the heart of people. I am so glad you like it.
Debrah
My sweet Debbie:
ReplyDeleteWith my grateful for you:
Debrah
¡Excellent!
ReplyDeleteA great poem about the nature of the man.
Marion
This type of poem exalts your name. I find it committed to human life and its vicissitudes.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
Dear Marion:
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your generous words.
Debrah
Beautiful words! Deep, hard and full of reflection. This poem is the reality in words.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings:
Melanie
Amazing poem!
ReplyDeleteIt´s a pleasure contact to you.
Bjorn Ghasdg
Dear Yurgen:
ReplyDeleteMy friend, it´s a privilege reading your kind words.
I appreciate your friendship:
Kisses:
Debrah
My dear Melanie:
ReplyDeleteIt´s marvellous finding your visit in the blog.
Thanks a lot:
Debrah
My dear Bjorn Ghasdg:
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your visit.
Debrah
beautiful......
ReplyDeleteDear Ashwin Singh:
ReplyDeleteI appreciate visiting my blog.
I hope be your friend.
Warm greetings:
Debrah
PLEASE..pedophiles are a dime a dozen..and less.
ReplyDeleteHeyy..... check this out.... www.poetashwin.blogspot.com
ReplyDeletehey Debrah
ReplyDeleteits been long since you visited my place.
Hope to see you soon there.
Regards
Ashwin