Also, there are many manifestations of metamorphosis in nature, but the butterfly, perhaps from being so involved in our daily lives, it is my view, one of the most representative.
In this poem, I try to show my amazement so divine conception of change from a caterpillar to a butterfly. It seems that God intends to offer a simple example and wonderful than any human being can achieve through hard work, conviction to change their environment for something positive and proactive, as well as love and respect for their habitat.
METAMORPHOSIS
When I admire the transformation of the nature,
I feel myself more mortal, more fugacious, more inmaterial.
It is like to see the eternity resumed in one cycle
that oscillates slow and tenderly.
No words necessary to describe it,
and it is because there no exist.
Only one poem can describe it
and involves it in a word like divinity.
In the climax of the advent of a new way of life,
I remain in muting, trying to fill my soul
with the breath that exalts from the softness
of the wings whom are battling to reach the sun.
Debrah love:
ReplyDeleteI find your poem very satisfying, sweet and expressive. I love butterflies, its nature and customs. Welcome such profound expressions that make us think in many ways.
Blessings:
Alice
Dear Debrah:
ReplyDeleteAs always, your poetic style is impressive, deep and elocuent. It is amazing in how you select the themes for your poems. I am sure the poetry is a inextinguible falme of expression with a responsable sense.
Debrah, what a lovely poem. To me, Nature mirrors God and the spiritual life. The Butterfuly is a beautiful example of spiritual death, life and rebirth. And if the butterfly, how much moreso our own souls?
ReplyDeleteI'm a dragonfly lover and the fact that they are concieved in the air, live for a year in water as a nymph, then crawl out to the earth and fly just blows my mind. These complex little creatures of air, earth and water are my muses. Thank you for sharing your amazing poem.
Blessings,
Marion
Dear Debrah:
ReplyDeleteI tell you shocked me with your poem. The phrase " feel myself more mortal, more fugacious, more inmaterial." has made me reflect on many chapters of my life. Thanks for letting me clear my mind and my heart.
Dear Marion: I appreciate immensely your delicate and beautiful words. Undoubtedly share many things that enable us to strengthen this fledgling friendship. Your comments will strengthen and encourage me greatly.
ReplyDeleteWarm greetings:
Debrah
Fernanda, as always your words enclose the magic of your sensitivity.
ReplyDeleteBlessings:
Debrah
Debrah,
ReplyDeleteYour poem is so sweet and leaves the reader in a very peaceful frame of mind....
Excellent Debrah.
Eileen:)
Very gentle Eileen:
ReplyDeleteWhen a person like you pronounce those kind words, I feel connected to a reality that deserves the sum of all our efforts to change it. However, it is not enough, the struggle to understand our nature as mortal beings, it is necessary to try to change the way nature is perceived by modern man.
Thank you for your kindness:
Debrah
It is amazing the way You perceive the nature. Probably everybody need change the focus around our paper in the earth.
ReplyDeleteto me a butterfly represents hope and possibility. the beauty that's to come if we just persevere. and dream, of course. for dreams do become true, don't they...
ReplyDeleteand thank you for visiting, i appreciate it!
Dear Shadow:
ReplyDeleteIt is a privilege to receive your visit. I agree with your assessment and I am glad to exchange views. You have me as a friend and supporter.
Thank you very much:
Debrah
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ReplyDelete'trying to fill my soul
ReplyDeletewith the breath that exalts from the softness
of the wings whom are battling to reach the sun' Beautiful closing of her curtains and I am knowing of this which you speak (through your words just read), when you said at my place/in my space.....'Sometimes I try to find what a poem means to me, more that what the writer intended to say'. It should be like so, I am thinking. Words written should make the reader think beyond the printed matter.
SarhaA:
ReplyDeleteVery dear friend of mine, Your words move me immensely. You know I admire your thoughts and inspire me to think of a thousand things at once. Rest assured that I appreciate your inner beauty.
Grateful:
Debrah
Powerful, engaging write. Stunning for simplicity.
ReplyDeleteBut this, this I shall relish for its freshness --
"It is like to see the eternity resumed in one cycle
that oscillates slow and tenderly."
Dear Emeniano:
ReplyDeleteI have always maintained that every human being has much to say, but even more than listening. You have many things to say. I have many things to learn. I appreciate your visit to my blog and I hope you do repeatedly. I mention that I will add a link to your site.
Warm greetings:
Debrah
Totally amazing. I'm excited to have read so sublime poem.
ReplyDeleteDear Rodrigo:
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your words. Thanks.
Debrah
Dear Debrah:
ReplyDeleteYour poem is wonderfull because your words have soul.
A poem (haiku) for you:
UNA CRISÁLIDA
Una crisálida
en el aire de marzo.
Renacimiento.
Ana Muela Sopeña
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Oh, so dear Anna:
ReplyDeleteThis is more I deserve.
I am surprised about your beautiful gift. It is a honor receiving so delicated poem. This is the first time in my life that anybody writes something directed to me.
I will be in touch with you, because I feel empathy and gratitude about you.
Thanks a lot:
Debrah